*marry had a little lam remix* Average
It would sound much better if the piano line was actually possible to play on the piano. Add some more instruments too.
Average
It would sound much better if the piano line was actually possible to play on the piano. Add some more instruments too.
ya i no i jsut wanted to sumit it for a beginner song but thanks for the review my next classic will b much much better then this ill actually take sum time in to it ty
Not bad.
I did this AGES ago :P Still, sounded quite good. Piano was way too quiet, and the drumline was far too shallow though.
i made the drums shalow so they would stand out on the chours. but i fully aggree that it needs improvment.
Ahh.
The ol' Dock song. i've done a few covers of this in my time on the AP. The chord pattern in the B section was a bit wrong, try listning to some midis or play the game to get the feel of it.
One thing that sort of killed it was the techno-ish 'drum' that hit at the start of every bar. This was fair enough, but should have been introduced AFTER the drums started, as it was too heavy for the early part of the song.
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The sound quality was a bit low, and it was easy to tell when samples started and ended, due to noise. The reversed bit really didnt work very well for me. It was a nice mix though, and it was in time, so well done.
yeah i know it wasn't the best audio but this is my firt audio ever ever ever.
thanks for reviewing this audio!
oooO!
DUETY GOODNESS!
That was awesomely played, good on you for being one of the few who actually use a microphone
better on you for having decent recording quality.
It wasnt always in time, but it still sounded great. Might have been a little too fast, which could explain it. I LOVED THE END.
Make more. <3.
hMMmmMmm.
After being practicaly brought up on that game, its nice to have it come back. Only bone i would have to pick is its a little under-remixed at the start. Its basicaly the origional with a bass solo and a drumline, and the drums sound a tad tacky too, put some distortion on them, the other instruments come in way to late... and since this isnt progressive trance/rock, you have no excuse :-P I loved the ending.
Oh, and length isnt everything. My most popular track is about
Hmmn.
It reminded me of the jurassic park theme at the start. The.. clarinets(?) that came in after the piano ended were way too low, and there were an aweful lot of dischords in this. It was.. quite interestingly composed though, with lots of contrasting sections, but that drone note got annoying after a while. I like the pizzacato, it really seemed to fit in well.
First of all, thanks for the review ^^v Reviews are great!
Well... This is the first 'classical'-style song I made, and I think my last, because it took me WAY too long to finish it (like 6 months xD) and it's just not my style.
The drone? well... You don't like it, I do :P all I have to say.
And again, thnx for the review, I appreciate it ;)
Not bad
It was a little quiet, but still very good. One thing you should try to do is the horns that were playing the melody were just playing the same chords all together, and there was very little variation in the way they played. it made it sound sort of mechanised, but it sounded pretty awesome none the less. Put a timpani in there for good effect, and you need to cut the end silence off to make it loop. Remember flash artists have no idea how to edit sound.
Yea, it was quiet. But unfortunately, theres not much I can do about that. It was of FF already. Finale is just real bad for play back.
I guess your right about the horns, but I don't know what varaiations I could put in. I mean the original song had only 3-4 voices in it... and I didn't want put to many variations in voice leading or anything like that.
A timpani! Your right. I really should have put that. And I would have made it loop, but I don't know how to do that.
Thanks for the review. :D
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