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Quite a decent railshooter, but a few things need to be fixed:
1: theres no play button on the preloader, even when its finished loading. I had to right click>play it to start
2: The second level with the silencer, you had to put the silencer back on every screen which was really annoying, because it allowed you to get shot while you were putting it on.
3: Loads of spelling misakes: 'Arow down' 'Healt' 'arrow op' and so on
The music was a little too quiet and all i head was the beat, which really pissed me off, good thing you can turn it off, but it feels sort of lacking without any background sounds or music.
Author's Response:
the preloader DOES have a play button.....
but it apears about 2 or 3 seconds after the loading bar is full. patience my friend :P. Btw I will start fixing bugs real soon.
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Quite a decent game, but it had worse grammer and spelling than zero wing.
Instead of 'All your base'
its 'Go up, scape hell!'
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Quite a good game you have in the works here. Just a few moans:
1: The character movement speed was WAAAY too slow for my liking
2: This, like pretty much all flash platformers, was a little sketchy when it came to solid platforms
3: the levels were a little bit small
4: Maybe some sounds as opposed just to music?
Author's Response:
It runs slow because it's too active for your comp, turn the quality down
The bubble pops with a sound, and you hear a sound when you get money.
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I have absolutly no idea about football, but isnt the goal keeper normaly always #1?
Author's Response:
yes.. normaly it is, but not when it's a player who's the goalkeeper and i didn't use #1 for every one, so it's not all the same number... i tryed to make it a little more variant...
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A spite free mario movie? Incredible...
You realise this would be SOOOO much funnier with voice acting instead of text boxes, it takes the focus away from the action.
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Oh for gods sake.
Critical flaw:
United States wins a nuclear war.
Wait, I can simplify that considerably:
Critical flaw:
United States
Ok, theres great effort behind this. Really, there is, but this is nothign more than spoon fed stereotypical US propoganda from kids that were brought up on the fact that they are apparently the most powerful country in the world. This is the kind of movie that would bring a tear to the 'average' US citizens eye. Average meaning hanging a 5 foot flag out their bedroom window and sending their kids off to Iraq (Pronounced 'Ear-Rack' for all those in doubt) and being proud of them when they loose a limb or four. Now, us internet dwellers always enjoy a bit of thermonuclear war, but this totaly went over the top. The story line was so feeble and unbelivable, it looks like it was ripped right of Alex Chius' site. Which is most likely was, because he seems to support all these 'CHINA WILL INVADE YOUR COUNTRY' ideas. It seems that the US absolutly HAS to have some kind of 'scary enemy country'. in WW2 it was Germany, after that Russia, then the Middle east (namely Afghanastan and Iraq) and next it seems doomed to China to take a spotlight. Chances are China will never invade another country. They arnt exactly the nymphomanic breeding rabbits that everyone took them for. Through somwhat immoral meathods, they managed to bring their population under control and soon enough it will begin to decrease, and their resource situation will balence out. Now I can understand why they would expand for the sake of the story at least, but why did the US HAVE to become involved. Its pretty much like this every single war. I hope the US government knows that when they get attacked, the world isn't going to repay the favor, because the worlds getting sick to death of it. Inevitably, the nuclear war in the story is the US's fault. Read through the Authors comments. If US hadn't decided to go all 'LETS SAVE THE WORLD GUYSH!1!!!OMGLOL!!!', then China wouldn't of attacked the US, US wouldnt of fought back and tragedy would have been avoided.
Anyway, China would win.
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Ok, i appreciate you trying to follow up the amazingly successful second game, but you've made so many mistakes in this one. For a start, the whole movement thing. Instead of making the ball move you've made the world move around it which is fair enough, but view distance is way too small and on some levels it gets really annoying being blown about by fans you cant see. Next was the backgrounds. They moved FASTER than the forground, which is incorect and offputting and gives you a horrible disconception about your current speed, especialy when a large number of the levels had large open spaces with no walls for you to relate too. Infact, i think you should scrap the whole idea of moving camera. It's repulsivly terrible, nasious and takes the fun out of the game.
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A powerpoint tutorial made in.. flash? Thats a huge step in the wrong direction, but still, this was excelently laid out and if you can find somthing more usefull to tutorialize i'm sure you'd get better responses. Good job
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Ok, lets be blunt. The graphics wernt that great, the sound recording was rubish and the general implementation was crap.
..But..
That was one of the best sprite scripts i've ever seen. it actually had some humor in it, so much so it balences everything out. This has prooved what movies like arfenhaus and TDCM have done before it, crap movies can be great, and even the simplest artists can make the greatest things.
Not that you're simple. Or are you...
Author's Response:
that depends of what you think of me.
i know the voices aren't that good but they will improve later on. i cann assure you .
thanks for the review.
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You submitted a clan site? and a poorly designed one at that.
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