Score: 8

"Yay."

submission: key gallor

date: August 8, 2005

It sounds horrendously fruitylooped to me. There isnt very strong definition between the instruments, but that can be a good thing.

The tr808 drum kit really dosnt fit it, its too weedy for the track, try somthing with a bit more power behind it. What i like about this track is its really thick, it has a lot of sounds behind it that make up the music.

Score: 6

":o"

submission: ~~Battle Breaks~~

date: August 8, 2005

Sounds awfully... adobed.

You need a stedier drum rhythm and that bass drum has a terrible reverb.

Also, ORCHESTRA HIT = TEH SUX.

Dont use orchestra hit. ever. its so cliché, its the definition of cheese. AND GET A MELODY. and a chord progression. and a bass line. Then it could be good.

Score: 8

":| woo!"

submission: Tetris Hawk Remix

date: August 8, 2005

Apart from the fact its the definition of cliché, it sounded very dj birdy. I personaly think it would sound better if you reorded the melody to rematch the origional more. When you remix a popular song, you cant change the melody too much or it ruins the nostaligisitiy(sp?). I loved the broken synth though, and the scratching was pretty awesome.

All it needs now is some high piched voice going 'woo!' every two bars.

Score: 10

":o"

submission: Mario Bros. Theme

date: August 7, 2005

Well-fucking-done.

Ok, to be honest, it REALLY needs backing, nice bass and a jazzy drum riff, but the playing was great, you put a really nice swing to the melody, and it must have been hard to keep it in time like that. Get a band together and re-do it with backing.

Congratulations on being one of the very few submitters who manages to record music the way its ment to be recorded.

Score: 7

"Hmmmnn"

submission: Worms Theme RemiXX

date: August 7, 2005

Suffice to say i've never heard a worms theme remix before.

It needs a drum beat. Badly. What you have there barely qualifys as a riff.

Oh and put that piano out of its misery, its WAY too high pitched. Guitars quite nice though. Might try a worms theme remix myself.

Score: 10

":o"

submission: Zelda(C4-Remix)

date: June 28, 2005

OOOOooo. As a fellow zelda remixer, i feel abliged to review.

First off, put the bass up an octave, its too low to get a true audiable pitch. Next off, when the drums kick in, it sounds like its just repeating a fill, it needs a more steady rhythm. Make strings louder too, because they're carrying the melody, and they're being drowned out at current. I liked your synth rhythm riff, it really suited, and this track has real structure behind it. Well done.

Score: 7

":O"

submission: China Remade

date: June 28, 2005

First off, it had the right feel to it, very oriental. The flute was way overpowered by the other instruments, which spoiled the melody. The drum rhythm was perfect, it had the oriental upbeat, which was good for the track.

Many a time i've seen tracks like these with rock drum riffs.

Score: 8

"Ooo."

submission: pd

date: June 27, 2005

Ok, the first strings part was SEVERLY clipped. Turn the volume down on them, its distorting the sound. The randomness was good, sort of pulsey music as opposed to techno, and i loved your bass.

Score: 7

":D"

submission: Its a Beta Dance.

date: June 27, 2005

The first synth sounded like my toy keyboard i got in 1994... scary. anyway, its got an... interesting shape to it. Drums were too limited, SNARE REQUIRED :P. There was a weird lazery sound that had no pitch. Cant really describe it, but it was too loud, was drowning out melody, and the pitchbend on the late synth goes out of time with the music, which is annoying.

Score: 8

":O"

submission: Strummin' Along

date: June 27, 2005

Second from the top of the list and already has exactly 500 downloads and a score of 5.00?. cheating detected ;) Acids good, but it isnt THAT good :P

(oh well. this is the audio portal. NOBODY CARES)

To the track.

First off, dont put the drums just on one channel, and the riff you choose was far too fast for the guitar, and it repeted an awfull lot, it needed fills. The guitar was good though, ahh the joys of acid, it would probably sound better without the drums at this state. At least add a bass, that would make it sound rather spiffy.

Try to refrain from spamming the download link. Its pissing annoying, and really dosnt help you because it dosnt give you an idea of how many have downloaded your track.